托福写作水清木华7、8课程(四)1

例子：网络故事书（web－storybook service）
　　reading网络故事书的好处
　　1.可以教小朋友读书www.Ｅxamda.CoM
　　2.经济实惠，家长不需要为孩子买书了
　　3.可以代替父母陪伴孩子，为家长节省时间
　　lecture反驳来源：考试大
　　1.使用时不能和小朋友互动（ask question and get feedback）
　　2.网络上的故事都是过时的，要想读新故事还是要买书（不足）
　　3.父母与孩子一起读书可以增进感情
　　例文：来源：www.examda.com
　　The speaker rebuts the reading's argument by pointing out the inadequacy of the web-storybook services' interaction with children, the incompleteness of the data pool, and by undermining the assumption that saving parents' reading time is a benefit.
　　The speaker begins by stating that merely pronouncing the words and story for the children will not provide adequate learning experiences. Despite the time saved and pronunciation utilities laid out in the reading, the web services can only respond with "correct" or "not correct". The lack of feedback to children's questions will not create an effective learning process.
　　Then the speaker goes on to argue that the current web-storybook services have a very limited collection of books, thus not being able to save parents the cost of new books as the reading states, because the parents still have to buy many books that the web services do not provide.
　　Lastly, the speaker challenges the validity of the assumption of saving parents' time to read stories to children. The reading argues that saving the time is a benefit for the parents, but the speaker maintains that the whole point of reading stories is far beyond reading stories alone. In contrast, it is an essential way of communicating and building relationship between parents and children.
　　例子：网络问卷（web based survey）
　　reading网络问卷相对传统问卷的优势
　　1 调查范围广，结果就更为准确
　　2 发放，填写和收集问卷更加方便简单
　　3 成本低来源：考试大
　　lecture反驳网络问卷的优势
　　1 调查结果不全面因为不是所有人都会上网，中老年人上网会比较少
　　2 成本并不会低，因为一个好的网络问卷需要一个团队的大量工作（提出新的证据：网络问卷也需要成本和人力资源
　　3大多数人对网络问卷不严肃，得到不正确的信息，容易混淆视听。
　　例文：
　　The speaker questions the effectiveness of web based surveys by providing evidences contradictory to the reading.
　　First, he identified the reading's logical flaw in assuming that an increase in the scope and quantity of the survey will automatically translate to greater precision of the surveys. However, if surveys aim to question people over 60 years old, how can these old people conduct surveys online since this group seldom surf the Internet? The web surveys are effective in reaching mainly the young generation. Thus the results cannot be extended to demonstrate the views of the whole population.
　　Second, although the web-based surveys will lower paper cost, they will inevitably incur new costs in web designing, flashy features, and other elements, which will require more costly team work. This evidence effectively attacks the reading's argument that web surveys will certainly reduce the cost of the survey.
　　In the end, many web designers tend to overdo in the webpage and add fancy and flashy features. As a result, many people perceive the web-based surveys as not serious and are thus not willing to respond to the surveys. Unlike physical surveys that draw attention effectively, many web based surveys are simply ignored or even deleted.